[*my thoughts on the revision below]
*A decent part of my midterm critique a week ago was about how much I
dislike my own handwriting, and that others dislike it too! I'm not at
all offended by this particular critique because, well, yeah my
handwriting is actually pretty terrible and I don't feel it reflects my
voice at all. When I created the first version of Ultimo it was
mainly just to GET IT OUT...
