[*my thoughts on the revision below]
*A decent part of my midterm critique a week ago was about how much I dislike my own handwriting, and that others dislike it too! I'm not at all offended by this particular critique because, well, yeah my handwriting is actually pretty terrible and I don't feel it reflects my voice at all. When I created the first version of Ultimo it was mainly just to GET IT OUT of me and have a product made. But this revised version, where I magicked out the original handwriting and replaced it with wintergreen prints, is exactly what I originally had in mind when I started the project.
