(Apologies for the LONG delay! The following two pages were done three weeks before the completion of EHP. The 'finale' pages are the last two and were done far more recently.)
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[*my thoughts on the revision below]
*A decent part of my midterm critique a week ago was about how much I
dislike my own handwriting, and that others dislike it too! I'm not at
all offended by this particular critique because, well, yeah my
handwriting is actually pretty terrible and I don't feel it reflects my
voice at all. When I created the first version of Ultimo it was
mainly just to GET IT OUT...
The First Page...
I'm Molly, a Junior in Illustration at Rhode Island School of Design. I'm spending a semester in Rome creating a graphic travelogue, learning Italian, and training for the Rome Marathon.
For more of my art, visit www.mollystormjackson.com